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Post subject: Remington 11 Riot, please look and comment etc  Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 7:33 pm |
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| Fresh Meat |
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Yeah, I'm not too experienced with drawing guns, so if any of the gun vets, like Cap'n Scrambles, could give me some pointers and such I shall be a happy Polack.
It's a Remington model 11 riot version, again ballpoint pen and those fucking circles.
It's going to be a page with three shotguns on it, this is the first one.
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Post subject: Re: Remington 11 Riot, please look and comment etc Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 5:50 pm |
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It's really cool, but make the shading a little more dramatic and the lines a little strighter/darker to differentiate it from the background. Also, make the wood grain more embellished to give it that detailed and rustic look.
"Con Prudentia Et Audacia | With Prudence And Daring"
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Post subject: Re: Remington 11 Riot, please look and comment etc Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 11:39 am |
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| Has His Own Theme Song |
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I would just suggest adding some extra contrast between dark & light. Seeing as how it's hand-drawn, if it's dark, make it really dark, if it's light, make it really light. I would also suggest emphasizing the transition between dark & light a little more. Fantastic job so far, though.
I like puppies.
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Post subject: Re: Remington 11 Riot, please look and comment etc Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 1:30 pm |
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Kk, I'm almost done with the second one, and I improved the first one too, gonna update soon. Thanks for advice.
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Post subject: Re: Remington 11 Riot, please look and comment etc Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 3:01 pm |
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Update. Added an Ithaca 37. One more to go. Please continue giving me hints and tips, they are very helpful 
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Timfirkio
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Post subject: Re: Remington 11 Riot, please look and comment etc Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 11:21 pm |
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| In Bathtub of Wine with a G36 |
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Could you, like, stop giving me eyegasms please?
"Con Prudentia Et Audacia | With Prudence And Daring"
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Post subject: Re: Remington 11 Riot, please look and comment etc Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 7:27 am |
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Timfirkio
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Post subject: Re: Remington 11 Riot, please look and comment etc Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 8:01 pm |
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Lolz, good thing fuzzy never checks meltdown anymore.
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